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       <h3>WHOAMI</h3>
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-      <a href="https://zkm.de/en/about-us/history/founder-heinrich-klotz" target="_blank">Heinrich Klotz</a>, founder of the ZKM Karlsruhe, addressed an artwork of my father <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Walter_Giers" target="_blank">Walter Giers</a> ("Hände") from the late 1960s as the first interactive electronic artwork.<br>
-      As I am taking care of my fathers legacy I also feel responsible for this.
+      As his son I take care of the legacy of <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Walter_Giers" target="_blank">Walter Giers</a>, one of the pioneers of electronic art in the 1960s, which is why I feel responsible for this topic.<br>
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       <a href="https://giers.io">Victor Giers</a><br>